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Hi Shypettite
Spooky, feel this one had, I enjoyed tho. Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 16, 2006 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on October 6, 2006 at 9:24 PM | link to this | reply

posted by MasonGarrett on October 6, 2006 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Shypettite, isn't that a great tree.  This haiku fit right in with the pic.

posted by TAPS. on October 4, 2006 at 10:13 PM | link to this | reply

PostSmile! Very nicely done.

posted by BrightIrish on October 4, 2006 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

shy
very nice...

posted by Offy on October 4, 2006 at 5:52 AM | link to this | reply

Trying to understand how a shadow can hide in a cave

posted by Straightforward on October 3, 2006 at 8:09 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Shy---if u leave out "have" in Line3, it would work as well. I bear

a gift of Banyan and mermaids

  keep on keeping on! Haik away with the waves (of writing poetry, prose, peace) Shalom, Neil

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on October 3, 2006 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

Well wrote Shypettite, very good imagery burst. Mike

posted by lionladroar on October 3, 2006 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply

Ypundy cliks
Well written

posted by Kat02 on October 3, 2006 at 2:13 AM | link to this | reply

Well done. Must have a go myself.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 3, 2006 at 1:04 AM | link to this | reply