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Well crafted. Is this perhaps concerned with the safety of childhood in counterposition to the angst of adulthood. Is it the same sea that you reflect upon?

posted by Mavro on October 10, 2006 at 6:20 AM | link to this | reply

OFFBEATS, thanks for night visit.

posted by shypettite on October 2, 2006 at 7:38 PM | link to this | reply

shy

posted by Offy on October 2, 2006 at 7:37 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you all for visiting

posted by shypettite on October 2, 2006 at 5:39 PM | link to this | reply

Those lonely souls do dread the end of the night.... Well done!

posted by Troosha on October 2, 2006 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

Shy
I have to agree with everyone else makes the mind wonder

posted by Kat02 on October 2, 2006 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply

As Taps succinctly said, thoughts do scamper. It's an unnerving one.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 2, 2006 at 4:23 AM | link to this | reply

Mason, TAPS thank you. Nice couragment to start new day.

posted by shypettite on October 2, 2006 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

...vivid! ...Brava!

posted by MasonGarrett on October 1, 2006 at 10:49 PM | link to this | reply

Shypettite, That makes my thoughts go scampering in many directions.

posted by TAPS. on October 1, 2006 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply