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This poem in particular, brings out the deep-seated pain, but the words are a haunting echo of something hurtful, yet desirable. You seem to be sort of enjoying punishment. I therefore find it a little intriguing.
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 28, 2006 at 8:38 AM
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Jomei
thank you! Actually that's a picture from Salvador Dali...my favorite distoreted demented artist, lol.
posted by
cosy
on September 28, 2006 at 7:19 AM
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mystic
posted by
cosy
on September 28, 2006 at 7:18 AM
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avante
just from the heart...I'll sprout happier ones soon...
posted by
cosy
on September 28, 2006 at 7:17 AM
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Cosy, this was deep and mysterious. Had me intrigued. Well done!
Loved the visual layout too.
posted by
Jomei
on September 27, 2006 at 9:15 PM
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Cosy
That was really
very good. I like the structure you built to house yoru words
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on September 27, 2006 at 6:11 PM
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Cosy
A work of great magnitude. This is full of light and understanding.
posted by
avant-garde
on September 27, 2006 at 2:49 PM
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Troosha
does that make a bouquet of roses??
posted by
cosy
on September 27, 2006 at 12:26 PM
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Although your poetry seems driven by sadness
or anxiousness….. it shines and moves me into an understanding of your pain.
posted by
Troosha
on September 27, 2006 at 12:10 PM
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Kat
posted by
cosy
on September 27, 2006 at 8:58 AM
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Cosy
well written
posted by
Kat02
on September 27, 2006 at 8:49 AM
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