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star4you
Thanks so very much!  

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 11, 2006 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

teddypoet
Thanks so very, very much!  How beautiful and true your words are    
Nothing makes love more meaningful than life's trials.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 11, 2006 at 9:28 AM | link to this | reply

the rain began to fall
and she asked me,
"Is Love like the drifting cloud?
Full of teardrops, light flashes
and thunder?"...
I had to say,
"My Love, Love is all of that
and so very much more...
do you not hear the song of birds
after a fall of rain;
is the sky around you
not suddenly filled with an embracing calm?"...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on September 11, 2006 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful

posted by star4sky5 on September 11, 2006 at 8:42 AM | link to this | reply

Ann
Thanks so much!!!   

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 10, 2006 at 5:36 PM | link to this | reply

You're good at romantic poetry. Congrats, you have the prize here. Thank you for supporting the blog.

(A)

posted by A-and-B on September 10, 2006 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

NAJWA
Thanks so much! I really appreciate you're saying so!     

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 10, 2006 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

YOUR poem is very fresh and delightfull for my heart it is so pretty.......najwa

posted by NAJWA on September 10, 2006 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply

SYMPHONY
THANK YOU!!!    

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 10, 2006 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Wonderful.....

posted by _Symphony_ on September 10, 2006 at 7:49 AM | link to this | reply

Afzal
That's very beautiful, sweetheart. You're so very sweet.    
Just be careful, ok? I don't want to see you hurt.

posted by Afzal_Sunny7 on September 10, 2006 at 6:46 AM | link to this | reply

You are my only hope
You are
my only hope
my only light

Let the cloud be
as dark it can be

So long as
you are near
I have no fear

All my pain
will be filled
with pleasure

As you come
to share
your treasure

Your love.





posted by afzal50 on September 10, 2006 at 6:43 AM | link to this | reply