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marieclaire, I see you in a sunny place. I can't imagine you a creature of the night. I, on the other hand, come alive when the moon rises and the stars hang bright, when the noises of the night call out to me.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 29, 2006 at 3:12 AM
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well thanks Jazwolf
keep it simple as they say
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 28, 2006 at 10:11 PM
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Marie-Claire--- Very nice! Both in structure and message.
posted by
Jazwolf
on August 28, 2006 at 8:43 PM
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Good feeling--try New Mexico for lots of light, few hours of darkness
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 28, 2006 at 4:47 PM
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A lovely poem but more importantly it reveals an extremely positive and happy frame of mind. Savour the wonderful mood this piece reflects.
posted by
Troosha
on August 28, 2006 at 7:17 AM
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I want a place in that sun too!
posted by
Straightforward
on August 28, 2006 at 12:53 AM
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Teddypoet, not sure if I understand you correctly.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 28, 2006 at 12:22 AM
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marieclaire66,
'tis I who shall apologize; I meant only to leave note regarding what I found quite well-written. Take care.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 27, 2006 at 11:38 PM
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well thanks, I am a bit surprised though
the poem you left on hoarding was really clever I thought, with the message at the end. I think you do much better than me. why this sudden interest? My poetry has not improved overnight, in fact I am apologetic about the depressing stuff I write.
posted by
marieclaire66
on August 27, 2006 at 11:31 PM
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It seems your Soul shines as bright as that favoured sun...
absolutely great poetry!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 27, 2006 at 11:24 PM
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