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I love your style and you make sense. Makes me stop the rat race and stand still a minute.
posted by
chakazulu
on May 10, 2007 at 5:16 AM
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straight forward
posted by
star4sky5
on September 11, 2006 at 4:10 PM
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straight forward
posted by
star4sky5
on September 11, 2006 at 4:10 PM
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straight forward
posted by
star4sky5
on September 11, 2006 at 4:10 PM
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straight forward
posted by
star4sky5
on September 11, 2006 at 4:10 PM
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Gr8!
posted by
Sabsline
on September 8, 2006 at 12:38 PM
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appealing simplicity
it could be the basis for the structure of a short film or a cartoon
posted by
MsVision
on September 7, 2006 at 9:31 PM
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Non
Good post
posted by
Kat02
on September 5, 2006 at 11:50 AM
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Reply to your comment and your poem
HELP....
Did not understand your question? However; I don't believe that I am.
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Your poems where great and well writen.
posted by
The_Void
on September 3, 2006 at 8:35 PM
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Straight Forward
The alliterative style is simply excellent
posted by
Bhaskar.ing
on September 3, 2006 at 5:37 AM
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Going against gravity is always tough.
posted by
A-and-B
on September 2, 2006 at 5:50 AM
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it's strange how different persons connect the poem to their lives or their
experiences
posted by
Straightforward
on August 31, 2006 at 9:10 AM
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Thanks for posting that picture by way of comment YPunday
posted by
Straightforward
on August 31, 2006 at 9:09 AM
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Straightforward
It read like my life. lol
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 30, 2006 at 8:17 AM
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It'snot how many times you fall, buthow willing r u to get up and reach up
--upwards again. Here is the Utah inspiration--ARCH National Park
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on August 28, 2006 at 5:16 PM
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Your poetry is unique.
posted by
babe_rocks
on August 28, 2006 at 4:48 AM
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Sounds a lot like mountain climbing
and trails of true love....:) Great poem!
posted by
Katray2
on August 28, 2006 at 3:15 AM
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straightforward
enjoyed reading your poems. up up up plateau, this reminds me i should be more playful in writing,
thanks
posted by
appleworks7
on August 27, 2006 at 6:24 AM
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Perservere...
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 27, 2006 at 6:19 AM
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I fell of my P.C chair . . .
Laughing, one of the most entertaing poems I've read. Well wrote 
posted by
lionladroar
on August 27, 2006 at 1:58 AM
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GOOD!
posted by
Whacky
on August 26, 2006 at 9:11 PM
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