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YES YOU ARE RIGHT WE ALWAYS LEAVE FOR BETTER LIFE BUT WE MISS WHAT WE LEFT BEHIND BUT THAT IS LIFE ....... NAJWA

posted by NAJWA on August 19, 2006 at 2:47 AM | link to this | reply

Thank you, NAJWA!
I don't see it as sad, but as an allegory for the journey we make through life. We are always leaving town in one way or another.

posted by WriterofLight on August 18, 2006 at 6:37 PM | link to this | reply

IT IS REAL WHAT YOU SAY FOR SOME ONE DOES NOT HAVE PAST  OR RUNING AWAY / BUT IF I WILL TRAVELL AWAY FROM THE TOWN I LIVED I WILL CARRY WITH ME A HUGE BAG FULL WITH LOVE AND LAUGHTERS AND NAMES WITH ALL KIND OF FACES  I WILL CARRY IT WITH ME SO I REMMBER TO COME BACK BUT I READ YOUR WORDS THERE IS SAD TONE THIS TIME??      YOU ARE RIVER OF WORDS.     AND I LOVE TO READ FOR YOU EVERY TIME I FOUND YOUR POEMS THEY ARE UNIQUE AS YOUR SOUL......... NAJWA

posted by NAJWA on August 18, 2006 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply