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Whoa....
What a poem.  A warning to those that leave a trail....someday you'll feel silly if people know where you've been sleepin'. Good one.

posted by Dandell on September 30, 2006 at 1:47 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you,

Yes, I found all these things in the bathroom cabinet of my boyfriends holiday flat, left by my predecessor! I've been looking at them for months, and suddenly they turned into words.

Thanks for the encouragement

posted by dele_campbell on August 17, 2006 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

so sad
sucha sad poem, but I like the style

posted by Katherine_Ann on August 10, 2006 at 5:53 PM | link to this | reply

Did I understand this correctly...
You found remnants of someone else or did you find reminders of you?  Either way, cool poem.

posted by Troosha on August 10, 2006 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply