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Hmm, that's great lot of you read me.
About typo's , I should read it before I send to permanent section, but I always rush.
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star4sky5
on August 8, 2006 at 4:20 PM
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Hmm, that's great lot of you read me.
About typo's , I should read it before I send to permanent section, but I always rush.
posted by
star4sky5
on August 8, 2006 at 4:20 PM
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Hmm, that's great lot of you read me.
About typo's , I should read it before I send to permanent section, but I always rush.
posted by
star4sky5
on August 8, 2006 at 4:20 PM
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Wow
star
love the metaphor...love the way you delivered the message. Hugs~
posted by
cosy
on August 8, 2006 at 11:34 AM
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mmm...sad but sweet
I agree that this could work as a song. The only thing I found distracting was the run-on nautre of your sentences. Although in poetry the rules are very loose. Most of the time the cool thing about poetry is bending those rules.
posted by
WhiteJedi
on August 8, 2006 at 8:55 AM
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interesting
posted by
DarrkeThoughts
on August 8, 2006 at 8:33 AM
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I like this blog
I'm no good at reading poetry but this seems sad but peaceful and happy.
posted by
SomeoneElse
on August 8, 2006 at 8:00 AM
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I was singing to this poem
And then you made the line, "singing with the rhythm of an angel." Nice touch. Good timing.
posted by
Hadley-Madison
on August 8, 2006 at 7:43 AM
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VERY NICE
typo could be fixed
posted by
Shams-i-Heartsong
on August 7, 2006 at 11:56 PM
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thanks for reading passion
posted by
star4sky5
on August 7, 2006 at 8:09 PM
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Kind of sad....
Enjoyed this one though!
posted by
Passionflower
on August 7, 2006 at 8:06 PM
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Had a coat of aangel, faded in adry wash
posted by
star4sky5
on August 7, 2006 at 7:32 PM
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