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God! That was beautiful!
posted by
Spudnuts
on August 12, 2006 at 10:17 AM
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Very nice
Great writing this came from the heart
posted by
Kat02
on August 3, 2006 at 1:49 PM
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I LOVE IT
posted by
NAJWA
on August 3, 2006 at 11:50 AM
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Wow! Very powerful.
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on July 25, 2006 at 9:14 PM
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a beautiful piece.
posted by
fourcats
on July 22, 2006 at 7:13 PM
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Thanks you guys. I blogged more about this in my journal.
posted by
Schatz
on July 22, 2006 at 11:47 AM
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Schatz, this is an amazingly beautiful poem filled with a profound and beautiful love. We don't know that when we have children they will open the floodgates of a love we could not imagine; a love erases wounds with its healing waters. Moon_Spirit 
posted by
syzygy
on July 21, 2006 at 10:01 PM
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try to see yourself through her eyes. It's powerful.
You can be that person.
posted by
-blackcat
on July 21, 2006 at 4:53 PM
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Wow! What an amazing poem!
This is so beautiful...please show it to her when she's older. I pray you'll let go of all the old bullshit and just love her freely.
posted by
Passionflower
on July 21, 2006 at 4:15 PM
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