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Thank you both

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on July 21, 2006 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

   

posted by syzygy on July 21, 2006 at 3:18 AM | link to this | reply

"We are not different;
We are One," I sighed.
"Be not attached to pleasing
And be my Holy Bride."

This was my favorite part.  A very strong, well-communicated dynamic is going on in this poem.

Nicely done...          --Shawn, Tall & Skinny Poet

posted by TallAndSkinnyPoet on July 20, 2006 at 3:44 PM | link to this | reply