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Thanks, Tall & Skinny!
That's exactly what I had in mind.
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WriterofLight
on July 19, 2006 at 7:45 PM
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Good Way to View It
"while our woes and fears sleep on" - my favorite part of the poem. I had to read the ending a couple of times to understand it, but I think you're saying that new 'woes and fears' come everyday to join the ones we already have. We have to put them out of our minds to have positive self-fulfilling prophecies.
Well-written. 
--Shawn, "Tall & Skinny Poet"
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TallAndSkinnyPoet
on July 17, 2006 at 10:54 PM
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