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Nice rhythm, ligthearted winning ways with the best girl.
Also, the last line where u oofer "admiration" instead of love, is a nice twist. Good poetry do have a few surprises. Bravao---but do edit. Readers do apprecaite when proofreading has been taken seriously.
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ILLUMINATI8
on July 13, 2006 at 8:38 PM
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