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THANK YOU ALL FOR SUPPORTING MY POEMS YOU ARE MY REAL FAMILY
posted by
NAJWA
on July 7, 2006 at 3:35 PM
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Najwa
You are right love is in us all what we decide to do with it is another matter, You truly write from your heart
posted by
Kat02
on July 7, 2006 at 9:05 AM
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Najwa, the Truth of your experiences shines and Love breaks the clouds
every time! LoVe is the only thing; like God smiling behind every cloud.
I would work on spelling and grammar some of the time. There are times, of course, when it is more important to get the words out....the communication thing. "
Finally a couplet: "You love to write, you love to commmunicate;
"Lady, I understand, but kindly edit and punctuate." Smile with me, my new Poet Pal
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 6, 2006 at 8:38 PM
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Najwa
This is very heart felt good writing
posted by
Kat02
on July 6, 2006 at 5:35 AM
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I KNOW
posted by
NAJWA
on July 5, 2006 at 2:06 PM
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