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...between your feelings and the dew. I thought the ending was sort of a twist because I was thinking the rest of the poem was about loving yourself no matter how insigificant your feelings might be, but maybe I need to read it again. Overall, you have great meter and flow from stanza to stanza, and the rhyming really works well here.
MY SMILING HEART COULD NEVER TELL WHAT DEVELOPES IN MY MIND - that was my favorite line for sure.
I'm very impressed with what you've written. --Shawn, "Tall & Skinny Poet"
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TallAndSkinnyPoet
on July 2, 2006 at 1:34 PM
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OH GOD YOU ARE THE LOVE ITS SELF IT IS SO SWEET SO BEAUTIFUL FROM THE DEEP TRUE SOUL. I WILL READ IT AGAIN AND AGAIN THINKING THAT WAS FOR ME FROM SOME ONE I LOVE TRUE
THANK YOU STRANGER NAJWA
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NAJWA
on July 2, 2006 at 11:44 AM
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