Go to coolacen
- Add a comment
- Go to Don’t Put All Your Eggs in One Basket
TallAndSkinnyPoet, Najwa, .Dave.
Thank you all, especially you TallAndSkinnyPoet. Najwa, thank you for telling me that I write wisdom.
posted by
coolacen
on July 1, 2006 at 8:39 AM
| link to this | reply
Right to Focus On This
The best parts of this poem are the clear theme, use of questions, and the specific example of the ice cream cones.
You kept it short, too, which added to the effect of what you wanted to say.
Keep it up!
--Shawn, "Tall & Skinny Poet"
posted by
TallAndSkinnyPoet
on June 30, 2006 at 5:58 PM
| link to this | reply
YOU WROTE WISDOM AND I LOVE YOUR POEM
posted by
NAJWA
on June 30, 2006 at 3:30 AM
| link to this | reply
Sound advice.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on June 30, 2006 at 2:37 AM
| link to this | reply