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the world of hip hop...
is quite dangerous...many things are handled via vendettas...i am following the circumstances that surround Proof's death with attention...i really hope light will be done and that the whole truth will be revealed...a lot of details remain in the shadow...
posted by
Marshallengraved
on June 20, 2006 at 12:36 PM
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Passionflower....I have changed those to Quotation marks ...hope it's right
Thanks for that
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:17 PM
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Thank you ever so much for being honest - Passionflower
I soooo wish I had somebody to really help me with that - as it all really confuses me.....even when I study magazines or books or anything you read - I still can't grasp....grammar, formatting ...etc...I wish somebody would make a blog like that for somebody like me.....
Thanks so much for everything .....
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:05 PM
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Thanks SuccessWarrior
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:02 PM
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ahhh thanks so much Justi
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:02 PM
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hehehe bel_1965
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:02 PM
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A-and-B
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:01 PM
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Thanks so much DarrkeThoughts
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 20, 2006 at 12:01 PM
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I enjoyed it too. All dialogue should be in
Quotation marks though.
"Didn't I tell you not to come?" asked Sandra.
"I came because I love you," Jake answered back.
You just need to work on your grammar, punctuation and formatting.
posted by
Passionflower
on June 20, 2006 at 11:24 AM
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Nice twist
posted by
SuccessWarrior
on June 20, 2006 at 8:32 AM
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Symphony
That is really good. You had me until the stand in the door.... This was really good.
posted by
Justi
on June 20, 2006 at 7:49 AM
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Ouch!!!
That would certainly make for a very bad day.
posted by
bel_1965
on June 20, 2006 at 6:27 AM
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posted by
A-and-B
on June 20, 2006 at 5:22 AM
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You really had me going with that story...I couldn't figure out WHY she was so unhappy with all his attention until that last line...good job!!
posted by
DarrkeThoughts
on June 20, 2006 at 5:05 AM
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