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beautiful!
posted by
Afzal_Sunny7
on June 22, 2006 at 11:20 PM
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Lovely!
Well I think it is beautiful, the image of pear and the birth of discovery, hidden among the branches.
prettiness.
posted by
Nascent
on June 21, 2006 at 8:47 PM
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Thought this was light and fresh
In many pieces you and
markng have a similar approach - Cleverly nail the point. Nice piece.
posted by
Troosha
on June 21, 2006 at 9:52 AM
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That's probably because I
didn't have my usual wits about me when I wrote them. Two of these are haiku, so that would explain the lack of rhymme.
Folks, if you have the time and the patience, check out my latest entry on my "Assimilated by the Blog" blog, "I get lost in highway heat." That's the longest I've ever spent on a poem. Whooooo.
posted by
stbond
on June 18, 2006 at 9:04 AM
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the last three didn't have your usual rhyme and wit.
posted by
markng
on June 18, 2006 at 8:42 AM
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