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Hi Shypettite
Fabulous inner splash of emotions on loss of love, hurt and gloom. Hope it was only imagination. Mike
posted by
lionladroar
on October 5, 2006 at 7:21 AM
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I'm clicking here in case you didn't see my comment ont he poem
shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 28, 2006 at 7:30 AM
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Like a longer haiku--poignant. WE can and do survive loss &loneliness
Broken hearts will kmend; look at Mother Earth. Look at the UN, whose raison d'etre is to end conflict and must now wait for US to complete sending planeloads of laser-guided bombs before a cesafire. All Gandhis and Kings heart break, and mend, and forgive, and love again--unconditionally. thanks &SHALOM
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on July 27, 2006 at 6:14 AM
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It should be "know"
posted by
shypettite
on June 20, 2006 at 8:56 PM
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Hi, Brettnik, Yes, I kow this song of Cure. You are right.
posted by
shypettite
on June 20, 2006 at 8:55 PM
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You know the Cure's song without you? Also devastating.
posted by
brettnik
on June 20, 2006 at 4:02 PM
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Shypettite--- Your poems truly are remarkable. I see only an occasional
error in them. If there were an easy way to do so, I'd point them out to you. But this system does not allow for that.
posted by
Jazwolf
on June 18, 2006 at 7:24 PM
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Samhain Moon, thank you for reading and your nice comment.
It means a lot to me, knowing that somebody likes what I am tryind to tell in English, that is my second language.
posted by
shypettite
on June 13, 2006 at 9:51 PM
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You words are always beautiful, eternal, personal. Samhain_Moon 
posted by
syzygy
on June 13, 2006 at 9:39 PM
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