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THANK YOU FOR YOUR SUPPORT YOU ARE MY AMERICAN FAMILLY  I LOVE YOU

posted by NAJWA on May 30, 2006 at 3:22 PM | link to this | reply

You Should Be Proud of This

"I am a little dot everywhere..."  That is a terrific line!  That for me was the focal point of the whole poem.  I was confused with the "they" stuff pronoun change at the end, but all and all this is a strong love poem. 

Thank you for this fine contribution.    --Shawn, "Tall and Skinny Poet"

posted by TallAndSkinnyPoet on May 30, 2006 at 2:10 PM | link to this | reply

I Am The Histroy

this poem  is a cry from the heart, it really moved me.

posted by hope26 on May 30, 2006 at 1:49 PM | link to this | reply