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I like the simplicity of that closing - just do it, a baby will be good for him. :-)
posted by
markng
on May 26, 2006 at 5:58 AM
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ms vision
Sometimes the most simple interactions are the most powerful bits of fiction. Good writing.
posted by
avant-garde
on May 26, 2006 at 3:18 AM
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One of my favorite things to do,
eat an icecream cone. This was a great little piece
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on May 25, 2006 at 5:01 PM
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I like this a lot. I see a bigger piece coming out of this!
posted by
brettnik
on May 25, 2006 at 12:59 PM
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This is different. Seperate stories like people sitting sperately while they eat. A first, I didn' get into it but I re-read it again and I like it. Maybe a few more scenes and then maybe tie it all together or set the scene up. Not a story...not a movie...somewhere inbetween.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on May 25, 2006 at 12:20 PM
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MsVision.....Nice images here with the ice cream, especially....
Great little vignettes that knit a story together...Enjoyable.
posted by
MedusaNextDoor
on May 25, 2006 at 12:01 PM
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nice stuff...
...I love immediate fiction...a scene thjat tells a story...like watching people on a bus flash by...or people in a bus stop shelter, kissing, in the rain...at night..and you flash by in your car...wee stories are everywhere...immediate fiction...
posted by
FranklyMydear1
on May 25, 2006 at 7:00 AM
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Pink was always my favorite as a child!
posted by
Original_Influence
on May 25, 2006 at 5:15 AM
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Now I want some Ice Cream
posted by
bel_1965
on May 25, 2006 at 5:10 AM
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