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I agree with blackpearl1
the style terse and breif yet there are plenty of details. well done.
posted by
markng
on May 23, 2006 at 8:04 PM
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Hi, MsVision,
I admire the way this is written with so much detail, but also very short. That's a great skill. Short, easy to digest pieces seem to work well on this site. Keep it up. :)
posted by
BlackPearl1
on May 22, 2006 at 10:39 PM
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I enjoyed both pieces.
I read the recent one first. Great writing! Hope you had a nice weekend
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on May 22, 2006 at 5:06 PM
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posted by
Amanda__
on May 21, 2006 at 7:48 PM
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I WILL HAVE TO READ ALL OF THIS.
posted by
FARSAILOR
on May 20, 2006 at 10:08 AM
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fictional shorts
I'm currently researching story 4 of Miranda Sweet's adventures. To keep in practice I'll be posting some intermission style posts. Love them or hate them but please give me lots of feedback.
posted by
MsVision
on May 19, 2006 at 10:51 PM
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