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Ah yes
A good start for any fantasy. Battle scenes and all that jazz, personally I don't enjoy the sensai scenes as much as most do it would seem, though bravo for keeping up the tradition. A lot of action I see, my criticism would be to put it into more flowing words, but that is my own opinion =)
I liked it. I love the name of this piece A Mid Spring's Breeze.
I personally enjoy writing alternative fantasies, such as the pieces I'm working on now called the Tales of the Nomadicians. I haven't really edited it though, so it may seem rusty to you =(, feel free and come check it out though if you like.
Bye for now
Greg'
posted by
Death_Smith
on June 5, 2006 at 8:21 PM
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Wow. This is serious stuff.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on May 20, 2006 at 3:02 AM
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