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                    Thanks for the feedback, it is always welcomed..
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    FARSAILOR
                     on May 2, 2006 at 9:06 AM
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                    good start...
                
                I'd suggest, for your own guidance, that you create a plot outline. 
  As inspiration hits you, you can plug bits in to the proper spot for continuity. And after you've finished this first draft, do one focused edit to pick up grammar problems, such as using "ask" when you meant "asked" -- one of my problems is subject-verb agreement (plurals & singulars) and present tense/past tense things, so I may be a bit obsessive about them.. :)pat   
                
                    posted by
                    Pat_B
                     on May 2, 2006 at 9:01 AM
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