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- Go to The Secret Room
I hope you continue to find inspiration in your secret room
its nice to have some time and space to think, reflect and create.
posted by
MsVision
on May 6, 2006 at 4:11 PM
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nice bit there...your poem on staying safe
...hope you;re liking NY...
posted by
FranklyMydear1
on May 4, 2006 at 2:21 PM
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posted by
lilaznthug85
on May 1, 2006 at 8:38 AM
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shypettite --very nice shy one.
posted by
scriber
on May 1, 2006 at 8:10 AM
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..very nice.. a good place to be...
posted by
MasonGarrett
on April 28, 2006 at 1:36 AM
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beautiful
beautiful poem
posted by
mr-nobody1
on April 27, 2006 at 5:08 PM
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Shypettite
I am happy you have that room, especially if you hide in there to write these gems of poetry luv
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 27, 2006 at 10:07 AM
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shypettite
The poem is perfect, and I think many of us have similar secret places where we go to be safe. I wish I could say so much with so few words. ( In the last lines, perhaps 'keeping' might be more suitable than 'taking' - but who would correct a flower?)
posted by
bilbilis
on April 27, 2006 at 6:32 AM
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Lovely Poem..
posted by
BrightIrish
on April 27, 2006 at 5:08 AM
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shypettite, this is beautiful - beautiful - i love your poetry.....samhain_moon 
posted by
syzygy
on April 26, 2006 at 9:51 PM
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Okay, glad to know that...I'll help when I read. One more, "angel" needs no
capitalization
posted by
Ariala
on April 26, 2006 at 8:02 PM
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Oposite, I am looking for this kind of help. English is my
second language, I am still learning. All comments like this are so helpful and so welcome. Thanks. I am looking for more, if you find any mistakes in my poetry.
posted by
shypettite
on April 26, 2006 at 7:50 PM
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Forgive me for editing...tell me to go away anytime! LOL
posted by
Ariala
on April 26, 2006 at 7:45 PM
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shypetite, also take "a" out before fear
posted by
Ariala
on April 26, 2006 at 7:44 PM
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Thanks, Ariala, I am going to change it, right now.
posted by
shypettite
on April 26, 2006 at 7:44 PM
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Just a thought...this is a neat poem. I would change the word "for"
to from in the third line, and take "s" off of guards on the last word.
posted by
Ariala
on April 26, 2006 at 7:40 PM
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