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Thanks one and all...
This was a fun piece to write, and reflects what I saw off my dock, tuesday evening.....
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 20, 2006 at 3:18 PM
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My mother loved fishing...so I well know what gar are.
They are not tasty fish that you can grill or eat at all. But they are quite large and awesome looking. Enjoyed your post!!!
posted by
Passionflower
on April 19, 2006 at 8:52 AM
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The metaphors, the alliteration, the assonance and the whole picture of this descriptive poem - great stuff. Enjoyed this.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on April 19, 2006 at 8:51 AM
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THANKS FARSAILOR FOR THE FEEDBACK.....I ENJOYED "SILVER SHAPES" FOR ME IT IS A LIGHT NIMBLE PIECE...K-SOLO...
posted by
K-SOLO
on April 19, 2006 at 8:32 AM
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thanks for the ps at the end:)
posted by
microba
on April 19, 2006 at 7:11 AM
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Aye ! ' Farsailor' nothin' like a good fish
69&^*!@!**!!@ ^%$69.. .. kin' story to get ya' goin' in the mornin'
I thought 'gar' was war, as in "ce la vie, ce la gar"
"such is life, such is war" WWPiMM
posted by
WWPiMM
on April 19, 2006 at 5:40 AM
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