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I have read this a few times as I keep coming back
to find your next post
posted by
Azur
on April 12, 2006 at 10:49 PM
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Beautiful, Rembersant and yet so Sad
~Silly
posted by
SillySoul88
on April 12, 2006 at 10:00 AM
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Helloo
I really enjoyed this although it made me feel sad. I still have a doll, if you can call it that from my childhood which should be thrown out, but I cannot bring myself to do it. The rest of your poetry is so good too. Keep it up I love reading it. V.
posted by
Vangelina
on April 12, 2006 at 1:54 AM
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Shy
I read your piece from the 15th and especially enjoyed the second part of it. It was well done. this piece is also good. Taking a simple object, and injecting it with meaning, makes great poetry.
Be well,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on April 11, 2006 at 7:21 PM
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shy
Good work.
posted by
avant-garde
on April 11, 2006 at 1:19 PM
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I like this
This poem speaks to me. I'm sorry for your loss. I had a beloved doll, and never could simply throw anything with a face in the trashcan.
posted by
stbond
on April 11, 2006 at 4:06 AM
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Hi,
I think everyone can understand the pain of losing such a beloved relic from childhood. I have a huge cloth teddy who's looking very moth-eaten and has seen better days and now smells of mothballs but he is in my kist, wrapped in paper. I know the day will come when he has to be binned but I'm dreading that day.
posted by
fionajean
on April 11, 2006 at 1:52 AM
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My answer for 2 quastions, somebody asked me.
1) What does mean"Lalka" in my last entry. Lalka in Polish means simply "doll". I didn't name my doll, when I was a child.
2) What do roses mean, which I use to leave as a comments?- I read a lot in Blogit, but I am usually too tired or busy to leave comments. Sometimes, I'm just leaving the sign, that I read some entry and I liked it. So my roses are like my footprint in your posts.
posted by
shypettite
on April 10, 2006 at 9:04 PM
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TAPS, you are right. Maybe she was not so happy with me, too. Things
happening, I am sorry for her and for myself.
posted by
shypettite
on April 10, 2006 at 7:32 PM
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shypettite
Abused toys have a way of getting back at you.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 10, 2006 at 4:30 PM
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Nice transports to timeless feels.
posted by
franciscan
on April 10, 2006 at 2:31 PM
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Sorry for your loss. I still have mine. Had it repaired.
posted by
brettnik
on April 10, 2006 at 6:45 AM
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Wow!!!
posted by
shypettite
on April 10, 2006 at 6:14 AM
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I had a doll like that. We were in another country, and some psycho
policeman threw it into the street and shot it up because he thought I had a bomb in it. Really.
posted by
Renigade
on April 10, 2006 at 4:30 AM
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It might sound a little pathetic, I know. It is not exactly about a doll.
She was one of the things, I took with me leaving my country. I had her from "forever". She looked already a little ugly. But it is a whole story about me, about leaving people, leaving your past. And this stupid accident with heater ( by the way - during the winter it wasn't as hot as it is now, when it should be alraedy turn off).
posted by
shypettite
on April 9, 2006 at 9:29 PM
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...that's very, very sad Shypetitte....i'm sorry for you loss SL
posted by
magic_moon
on April 9, 2006 at 9:20 PM
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