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Your poem, though short, was a consise, clear thought, provoking a mental image from my time in Kansas...
posted by
FARSAILOR
on April 6, 2006 at 1:00 PM
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Hmm.
Nice poem, but too short. To be honest, I think u should make it a bit longer, but not too long bcaus i don't like to read much. Read my poems and make comments. Write more.
posted by
coolacen
on April 6, 2006 at 9:41 AM
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