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posted by
MasonGarrett
on April 6, 2006 at 4:27 PM
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This is a good one!!! I love it.
posted by
shypettite
on April 5, 2006 at 9:37 PM
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shypetite,
between spark and flame
the quality of life is
decided: the game!
--kingmi
posted by
kingmi
on April 5, 2006 at 9:35 PM
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Thanks for stepping by and for your comment. I love haikus.
Sometimes you can express more in such a short form than in long poem. But, it isn't easy. I am just haiku " poet"in training.
posted by
shypettite
on April 5, 2006 at 9:28 PM
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shypettite
I like your haiku. I read them all. Very good. My favorite one here is
Haiku With Rose. It brough back memories of my grandma's garden gate and her rose trellis and how much she loved roses. She named me when I was born and gave me the middle name of Rose.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 5, 2006 at 9:23 PM
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Thanks for comment. Haiku with its rigourous form cannot says more
, but just point the thoughts or reflection.
posted by
shypettite
on April 5, 2006 at 9:02 PM
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witty
very cute. actually, i have studied a great deal of religion at my university and on my own and what i like about your poem was that it quickly points out what most people don't realize: Biblically speaking, one should consider the fact that humans were the first of God's creation in the Genesis story to essentially tell him "no".
i liked your poem quite a bit.
katep
posted by
katep
on April 5, 2006 at 8:27 PM
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