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Unlucky thirteen-I expected her to have a heart attack at any minute.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on April 4, 2006 at 11:52 PM
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cane toads eeeeek!
posted by
brisbane_artist
on April 2, 2006 at 1:14 PM
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My new post.
Dear M... I have posted a new horror story: 'The Boy in the Closet.. I hope you will enjoy this one.
regards.... Prof
posted by
PROF-SUMAKEL33
on April 1, 2006 at 2:22 AM
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This is well done. I look forward to the rest of it.
Is this a novel you're penning? Thanks for turning me on to your site!
posted by
brettnik
on March 29, 2006 at 12:21 PM
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OK, I've read it now -
next instalment please. I'm very impatient, I'm not keen on serials.
posted by
fionajean
on March 28, 2006 at 4:58 AM
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Nice story. I enjoyed it.
posted by
shypettite
on March 26, 2006 at 11:24 PM
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Oo La la quite intresting
~illy
posted by
SillySoul88
on March 26, 2006 at 1:43 PM
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great story with......
unique lines to inform other's of what is taking place. You show a great deal of passion and concern. I only wanted to stop by and say hello, since you have visited my site. Thank YOu for all your comments. I appreciate you reading and leaving good structure and criticism. I look forward to reading some more of your writing. Great work. Have a great week.
posted by
qutiepie58
on March 26, 2006 at 8:22 AM
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A wonderful comment.
Dear MsVision... You gave me a bucket of inspiration. You comment was like a wondrous poem which I will treasure.
I will surely drop a line for my next story. best regards and cheers.... 
Prof.
posted by
PROF-SUMAKEL33
on March 25, 2006 at 10:51 PM
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An invitation.
Dear MsV... I am inviting you to read my new story. It is titled: 'The Broken Rose Painting 
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Please leave some comments and I might add it to the next installment.
regards.. 
Prof.
posted by
PROF-SUMAKEL33
on March 25, 2006 at 1:35 AM
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hey
havent seen u on here for a while, thanks for the comment
posted by
lilaznthug85
on March 24, 2006 at 7:25 AM
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Thirteen.
Dear MsVision... Number 13 is my lucky number. I don't know how I picked it up but, it is one of my lucky numbers. My luckiest day is Thursday and it is 13th of the month. I normally go job hunting in Thursdays and twice I got a good job on a Thursday and it was 13.
Thank you for reading my blog. I guess you are somewhere in Queensland because of the toad. LOL.
Just guessing.. Cheers.... Prof.
posted by
PROF-SUMAKEL33
on March 23, 2006 at 10:32 PM
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really good
Thanks for stopping by my piece. I'm very impressed and am left wanting to read more to find out how things turn out. Keep going. Engrossing. I'll stop by again.
posted by
ano1377
on March 23, 2006 at 2:13 PM
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i'm amazed
posted by
lilaznthug85
on March 23, 2006 at 10:51 AM
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pure blue
Good story, just wanted to stop by and say hi
posted by
Lanetay
on March 23, 2006 at 6:41 AM
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Ms Vision
Fiction is hard to pull off, and you've done a good job with this one. Cheers.
posted by
avant-garde
on March 23, 2006 at 5:04 AM
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MsVision
I just thought I'd drop by to visit you, since you had done the same honor to me. From the small bit that I read, (2 entries), I think you have an interesting story going, and I'll try to follow along with you.
I'm glad you felt the "Ten Signs you're Growing Up" was worth your time. It's a copy of a list I made for my son a few years back. (I'm happy to say I think he can check off all ten items now.) Anyway, keep writing, I'll keep reading and I'll meet you somewhere out there where the eyes got dotted and the tees get crossed.
I bid you peace and understanding. Arley White
posted by
ArleyWhite
on March 22, 2006 at 4:49 PM
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hiii..
Thank you soooo much !!!!
posted by
abhilasha
on March 22, 2006 at 3:37 AM
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there's good life to your story.
proper punctuation and spelling would go a long way to cleaning it up, making it easier to read. but i'm a girl who refuses to capitalize things, so take anything i say with a grain of salt.
thanks for visiting my site.
(except for that comment, no salt needed.)
posted by
fourcats
on March 20, 2006 at 5:19 PM
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