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Excellent work, my friend!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 30, 2006 at 6:04 PM
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I think this haiku business might be a bit contagious
I'm tempted to write one myself. With a fridge full of mushrooms for a dinner tommorrow the imagery was particularly tangible.
posted by
MsVision
on March 17, 2006 at 4:50 AM
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Good elaboration of the thought process. There is the humorous aspect of both process being intertwined.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on March 1, 2006 at 1:16 PM
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hiiii..
This is one of the most simplest & most intriguing piece of poetry i have ever read....
posted by
abhilasha
on February 26, 2006 at 11:05 PM
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Love the entertwining of
metaphor, imagery, philosophy, and action. In short: damn good poem.
Aberjhani
posted by
Aberjhani
on February 26, 2006 at 2:15 PM
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straightforward
Good work elucidating the eternal process of creation.
posted by
avant-garde
on February 26, 2006 at 3:47 AM
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