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a good subject for poetry. I think you could play with the last line as it is a bit conversational. Very good message. Keep it coming.
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posted by
MsVision
on February 24, 2006 at 8:52 PM
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posted by
dejtemper
on February 24, 2006 at 8:51 PM
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That's actually a pretty good point...
cool poem, too.
A mulatto
An albino
A mosquito
My libido
posted by
Mademoiselle
on February 24, 2006 at 8:49 PM
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