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Dave Cryer
Thanks for reading and leaving a comment. Enigmatic and short lines is usually my style, with some variation. I like to leave room for interpretation. No offense to you or to Katray, but this is totally a Temple poem with the feel of my style from the start...I have much passion in my work.
posted by
Temple
on March 4, 2006 at 8:20 PM
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Doggie
I had commented quickly before...he lives here, and we have met many times. When I see him, because of his schedule in the Marines (and because Camp Pendleton is 40 minutes away) we spend days together. I don't normally let people do that...certainly not weekly. He works for days straight, can't leave base, no time off. It's new to me, and scary as hell. Scary when he's here, scary when he's gone. Yikes.
posted by
Temple
on March 4, 2006 at 8:17 PM
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Original Influence
He really is. I mean, thank you so much!
posted by
Temple
on March 4, 2006 at 8:13 PM
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HolyGrail
Exactly. The power of believing in change....
posted by
Temple
on March 4, 2006 at 8:12 PM
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qutiepie58
Thank you so much for reading and leaving a comment. It makes me happy to know that you like my work, and anytime someone wishes to hear the words I pen I know I've done something right. I can never speak them, but I wrote them and showed them to the boy I feel them for. You never know what can happen one day for you. My life is the perfect example. Passion begets passion.
posted by
Temple
on March 4, 2006 at 8:11 PM
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Temp
Fear/distance... same thing :).
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on February 28, 2006 at 7:07 PM
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Enigmatic. I like the short lines. Sensuous and passionate too. Has the feel of a Katray poem. Nice work.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on February 28, 2006 at 2:24 AM
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no distance this time, doggie...
just my own fear...
unless you're talking about Chicago.
posted by
Temple
on February 25, 2006 at 5:52 PM
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temp
Worry later about the distance - just meet for now :).
Be fine,
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on February 25, 2006 at 11:23 AM
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Beautiful!
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 24, 2006 at 8:58 AM
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Mmmmmmm....
posted by
Holy_Grail
on February 24, 2006 at 8:27 AM
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No Mercy
I love your work. I only wish someone would say those words to me. lol YOu write with passion and it shows through your great work. Keep it up. Have a great weekend.
posted by
qutiepie58
on February 24, 2006 at 7:07 AM
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