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rafika
What can I say? This compliment from you is so touching. You're poetry is so flawless and descriptive (I do read when I can, but life so so busy I don't comment anywhere much right now....on the rare chance I get to read...). I appreciate it greatly, thank you.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 5:11 AM
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DrJPT
You hit it right on the money, Dr., distaste. I was not havin' it. Not too much pain, but I have been shocked at this man's audacity on more than one occasion. This was the worst. So, I burst into this N'Sync song and sang..."Bye bye bye..." ... ha ha.... I loved what was good, had fun while it lasted, and got good writing out of it. No regrets.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 5:09 AM
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Symphony
Thanks, sweetie. This was a hard one to capture for me. I've missed you, too! Then again, these days, I miss everything...lol... I hope all is well with you. You take care, too, doll.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 5:06 AM
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anglofinspirtion
Thank you for reading.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 5:05 AM
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DeadGuy
That is so sweet.
My path is brilliant and new, thank you. Very exciting these days, and so busy. As I said to redlunar and WhiteJedi, I was just writing, but I'm okay. Not sad. He is the sad speciman. I took the situation and made it a piece that I like, and I tend to write intensely. Hope all is well with you, also.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 5:04 AM
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redlunar
Even your comments are poetic.
No tears, no no...just expression. I am okay, honest. See what I wrote to WhiteJedi down there. I just write intensely sometimes. He is the sad one, because he lives life that way. Thanks for such a sweet comment.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 5:01 AM
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Doggie
There you go again. Being the strong silent type? Or are you having some computer problem? :::waving::: Do tell me what you thought of this when you can speak again, because I'd love your opinion on this.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 4:58 AM
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Spiffy
Yeah, you understand. We've talked this to death. Blah. I don't know how many situations it applies to, but hopefully I don't find another one! Dang.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 4:56 AM
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CrimsonCarouse
See what I said to WhiteJedi for part.... Thank you for reading and leaving a footprint. :) Nice to see a new name. Yes, he let me down, but in the end really it's him that lost.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 4:53 AM
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WhiteJedi
Well, I try not to divulge too much about my mindset...what the poem was about...so people can make their own interpretations. But, I will say (for all, too, that thought this was sad) that this wasn't really sad for me....I was mostly indignant, but I think really he's the sad one to think he can be like this in life. I'm okay.
I don't let people like him hurt me, but it does make for good writing. Thank you for reading.
posted by
Temple
on February 10, 2006 at 4:52 AM
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Profoundly touching words
Your gift for clarity, insight and feeling is painfully evident in this piece of outstanding writing. Thank you for sharing this great effort with the community.
posted by
rafika
on February 4, 2006 at 12:41 PM
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Sounds Like Pain
Yet point of the distaste for disrespect was clear.
posted by
Dr_JPT
on February 2, 2006 at 6:14 AM
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Wow Temple....very deep and powerful....
the emotion was totally captured.
...take care I have missed you.
posted by
_Symphony_
on February 2, 2006 at 4:38 AM
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posted by
anglofinspirtion
on February 1, 2006 at 6:01 PM
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Temple
So sad a poem...so beautiful the heart within it...Hoping all is well along your path
posted by
bwFrampton
on February 1, 2006 at 5:24 PM
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Temple
Do take care, dear one...your words flow like a teardrop falling from a blue face...red
posted by
redlunar
on February 1, 2006 at 5:49 AM
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Temp
posted by
smartdog_670
on February 1, 2006 at 5:33 AM
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T,
Hmmm.... I think I totally understand. Weird, but so true for so many situations.
posted by
SpitFire70
on February 1, 2006 at 2:20 AM
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Sad but nicely written
Sounds like somebody let you down
posted by
CrimsonCarouse
on January 31, 2006 at 10:06 PM
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how sad.
posted by
WhiteJedi
on January 31, 2006 at 5:17 PM
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