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CuddlyOne
Wow, I've missed you!  I'm glad you liked it.  Thank you.

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:48 AM | link to this | reply

Reni
Yeah, wouldn't want that.  What kind of club would that be?    xo

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply

Doggie
Sharp, indeed.  I save the soft for purring boys.  Stay in drive, good doggie. 

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:46 AM | link to this | reply

HolyGrail
Yep, I wrote this with one person in mind....but since then there was someone else I could have sent it out, too.  People can be like that.  But, good thing it goes the other way too.   xo

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:45 AM | link to this | reply

DrJPT
That's me!  lol...thank you. :)

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

AllergicHobbit
Well, thank you for reading AND commenting!  Here I go and give you grief then disappear and don't respond.  My manners are usually much better, but life is so busy these days.  I'm glad you liked it. :)

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:44 AM | link to this | reply

DeadGuy
I liked the shattered glass image also...it worked perfectly in my head, too.  Thank you. :)

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:43 AM | link to this | reply

Jaxton
Thank you.   I'm glad you liked it.  Too bad I can't walk and look up at the same time...lol....

posted by Temple on February 10, 2006 at 4:41 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Temple, well done, Lady.

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on January 21, 2006 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

I never walk uphill for anyone. Might break a sweat...

posted by Renigade on January 19, 2006 at 3:01 PM | link to this | reply

Temp
Nice and sharp.  Good post.

-smartdog (Hear that?  That's my motor)

posted by smartdog_670 on January 17, 2006 at 8:17 PM | link to this | reply

I think we all know someone we could say those things to.   Hope the job is going well.

posted by Holy_Grail on January 17, 2006 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Awesome!!
Open, honest and to the point!!

posted by Dr_JPT on January 17, 2006 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

Ahhhhhh!

Clear, beautiful poetry even a barbarian can appreciate!

(forgive my bad habit, I usually read without commenting)

posted by AllergicHobbit on January 17, 2006 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

Temple
Such imagery and, mayhap, symbolism? The comparison to shattered glass hit me hard, my friend. Very good, emotional work!

posted by bwFrampton on January 17, 2006 at 6:35 AM | link to this | reply

NICE !!!!!!!
You're good at blending words and thoughts.

posted by Jaxson-Pete on January 17, 2006 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply