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I read this aloud to my wife:
my wife thinks it's very moody and the mood envelopes and embraces you...
I am struck by its the clever construction of your rhythms and the stealthy steady climb of cadences that culminate in the final wish... there are many poems about the dark, but this one stands alone! Good work.
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Ebb.and.Flow
on January 14, 2006 at 8:18 AM
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