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-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on January 11, 2006 at 7:22 PM
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Trevor
If you felt like you were there, then I feel like I did a good thing. Thank you. :)
posted by
Temple
on January 10, 2006 at 1:16 AM
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Spitfire
I wish I could take credit for the photo, but it is lovely. It was even more pretty out by the ocean that night, but I don't have a camera to get the shot and the phone won't do the trick. I'm glad you like the poem, though. That I can take credit for...thank you. :)
posted by
Temple
on January 10, 2006 at 1:15 AM
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very vivid
and evocative. I felt like I was there.
posted by
Trevor_Cunnington
on January 9, 2006 at 5:48 AM
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T, that pic is SO pretty!!
As is the poem...
posted by
SpitFire70
on January 9, 2006 at 5:24 AM
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DeadGuy
It was a heavenly moment, a sign of something new to come. A reminder that I had to let the events of that particular day go and not shake my faith in the big picture. I'm a big believer in signs. I hope I could take you there. I'm glad you liked the piece.
posted by
Temple
on January 8, 2006 at 10:35 PM
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B
Sometimes wishes are granted that easily....if your will is strong, your intent true, you believe and have faith...you just never know. I'm glad you found it inspirational. :)
posted by
Temple
on January 8, 2006 at 10:33 PM
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Oh, Temple...
How I would have loved to have witnessed the scene that you so perfectly described in your poem. Well done, my friend. Absolutely beatuiful. It sounds as though a brand new world was opened for all to see.
posted by
bwFrampton
on January 8, 2006 at 11:31 AM
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If only wishes were granted that easily! That was an inspirational poem to give us hope to believe in wishes.
(B)
posted by
A-and-B
on January 8, 2006 at 4:06 AM
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DrJPT
I never tell people what my poetry is actually about, even if comments they leave a comment that shows they clearly interpreted it a different way than where I was coming from when I wrote it. I do that for one reason...I want people to experince it in whatever way is valuable to them. So, enjoy the words and the photo in whatever way you like, and don't worry about what it means. Leave that to those horrible college lit classes where they beat down every word of the poor poet! lol...thanks for reading.
posted by
Temple
on January 8, 2006 at 12:19 AM
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teddy, I'm so glad you liked it. :)
I was at the beach last night and that's how it looked. I said to my friend on the phone...angel water...because it was glowing bright, all of it...so this one got written in my head, right there. It all stays with me. Thank you.
posted by
Temple
on January 8, 2006 at 12:17 AM
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I know, HG, I'm so sorry.
I've been thinking of you. I hope you are okay.
xow
posted by
Temple
on January 8, 2006 at 12:15 AM
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Awesome
The visual makes the words meaningful, in my opinion. I am not a poerty interpreter!
Nice post!
posted by
Dr_JPT
on January 7, 2006 at 11:10 AM
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So intriguing...how you do captivate the imagination...well done, Dear Temple.
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 7, 2006 at 8:10 AM
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Of course everything is making my heart break today.
posted by
Holy_Grail
on January 7, 2006 at 7:24 AM
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