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Pretty good.
I like the math analogies.
posted by
Trevor_Cunnington
on January 4, 2006 at 2:28 PM
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Laki, excellent writing taking the reader to marvelous degrees of anticipation...great!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 3, 2006 at 9:57 PM
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Very touching . . .
Your heart is all over this. Keep writing from there. It stuck a chord.
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on January 3, 2006 at 7:06 PM
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Laki
This is an excellent poem, first time to read you, but will be back for more! 
posted by
Offy
on January 3, 2006 at 3:22 PM
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