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Beautiful poem. Man is made in the image of God but seldom acts god-like.

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posted by A-and-B on December 2, 2005 at 2:36 PM | link to this | reply

Nice words and lovely picture
There's an element of 'When you walk through the storm' from Carousel in here - my favourite ever musical.

posted by malcolm on December 2, 2005 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

poetjpb

Thank you too!

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 1, 2005 at 4:41 PM | link to this | reply

Jomei

We have been taught for a long time to seek 'conscious contact with the God of our own understanding.'

I went to the Harlem Gospel singers a while back and I cuddenly understood

"Direct Conscious Contact"

It changed me and my perspective enourmously.

Thanks for the comment,

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 1, 2005 at 4:41 PM | link to this | reply

Tiel

OK We say we either turn towards God or away.  We grow to be more like God as we draw closer to spirit and purity.  Everything that turns us awy from God murkys the water  everything that turns us towards make it clear and transparent.  So the more we drop 'falseness' - which is what our defenses are - denial-  the more God like  we become.

Others may have a different take though.

 

Glad you dropped in.

Jo

 

posted by brisbane_artist on December 1, 2005 at 4:39 PM | link to this | reply

avant-garde

Glad you enjoyed,

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 1, 2005 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

redlunar

It is good for you isn't it?

I am glad for you (and me too)

Jo

posted by brisbane_artist on December 1, 2005 at 4:35 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful as always.

posted by poetjpb on December 1, 2005 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

Jo
There is much humility in this poem. Those things we would rather not face can turn into beautiful things with a bit of patience and attention. Thanks.

posted by Jomei on December 1, 2005 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

brisbane
Wonderfully expressed. I can relate. We have all been in flash floods and murky waters. I have grown, become stronger, it has increased my faith. But I don't feel that it has made me more like God. Wish it had. Can you give me a quick rundown on your insight on that point?

posted by Tiel on December 1, 2005 at 3:26 PM | link to this | reply

Jo
Simply beautiful.

posted by avant-garde on December 1, 2005 at 12:26 PM | link to this | reply

brisbane,
yes, I have been made to look at these murky places -- your poem's query and answer is quite poignent. Well done.  red

posted by redlunar on December 1, 2005 at 11:49 AM | link to this | reply