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                    Tiel,
                
                Now that has got to be much worse!  
 

                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on November 2, 2005 at 12:27 PM
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                Yes, I'm with you on this.  But even with the pain of excising certain words, phrases and, yes, whole paragraphs, it's still US doing it to our offspring. When a professional editor goes to work on our offspring and rejects EVERYTHING we wrote, well---- 
                
                    posted by
                    Tiel
                     on November 2, 2005 at 11:21 AM
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                    Thanks for stopping in Kushie! 
                
                Nice to meet you. 
                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on October 31, 2005 at 5:06 PM
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                    I hear you!!!!
                
                I know exactly what you mean on that one!
                
                    posted by
                    kushie
                     on October 31, 2005 at 11:52 AM
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                    Thanks Jeff, great observation. 
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on October 31, 2005 at 10:38 AM
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                    Symphony, easy does it.
                
                It wouldn't do to tire yourself out too much. Pace yourself well. 
                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on October 31, 2005 at 10:38 AM
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                    Generally speaking
                
                the fewer the words the better the writing.
                
                    posted by
                    jollyjeff
                     on October 31, 2005 at 8:47 AM
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                    How very interesting way of putting it.
                
                I need to catch up with all my "real" writing projects.
                
                    posted by
                    _Symphony_
                     on October 31, 2005 at 7:27 AM
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                    Bright! 
                
                Packrats must be the only people who don't have support groups. When I demit office, the presidency is yours.  

 Drives me nuts when my smilies quit. Ah well. 
                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on October 30, 2005 at 7:54 PM
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                    word....
                
                If you ever resign that position keep in mind that I could take over without any training! :-)  My smilies aren't working..
                
                    posted by
                    BrightIrish
                     on October 30, 2005 at 7:33 PM
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                    Bright, 
                
                You are a wise one....It doesn't help that I'm the president of the packrat gang! 
                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on October 30, 2005 at 7:27 PM
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                    word.smith
                
                I do have a understanding of what you are saying. I didn't think you could kill your writing and after reading your comment, I see that I was right and you saved it! 

                
                    posted by
                    BrightIrish
                     on October 30, 2005 at 10:54 AM
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                    Ginnie, sometimes what I do 
                
                is to cut those parts I can't bear to lose and save them to one file, just in case I can use them elsehwhere. Talk about being unable to let go. 
                
                    posted by
                    word.smith
                     on October 30, 2005 at 10:05 AM
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                    So very true word!
                
                I'm rewriting and it feels just as you described!
                
                    posted by
                    ginnieb
                     on October 30, 2005 at 9:19 AM
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