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I love this poem and thought the bike metaphor was wonderful. I could see it in my mind's eye laying on its side in the grass.
posted by
Georgia
on September 17, 2005 at 9:12 AM
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wow...great work.
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 14, 2005 at 5:28 AM
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Wonderful poem--this line was spectacular (and so true):
Lost innocence...the price I pay for having lived.
posted by
Julia.
on September 13, 2005 at 10:33 PM
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Good to see you are writing again.
posted by
Passionflower
on September 13, 2005 at 9:31 AM
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