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Joe_Love, if you wrote a book, I would buy it, the hard=cover edition! You are such a talented writer! You have a God=given gift....LOVE your stuff!

~Mama.Dragonfly487

posted by Mama.Dragonfly on August 30, 2005 at 3:19 AM | link to this | reply

what? gramps in tighty whitey's ISN'T hot?

the hell you say?!!  lol.  You're an excellent writer with a keen eye for the absurd in everyday situations -- writing humor correctly is a hard task to pull off, and you do it wonderfully.  I'm in awe of how you've managed to keep the standard of your writing high, while still writing regularly :)

C

posted by caelia on August 29, 2005 at 11:19 PM | link to this | reply

Hey There!!
That brought a smile to my face!! Don't you just love small towns?  Schree`

posted by Schree on August 29, 2005 at 7:13 PM | link to this | reply

Love

First of all let me say, I missed ya while I was on vacation. Well how did the convesation fly after that?     (No pun intended). He probably figures after 80 years-old what does it matter. is your friend going to take the apartment/

posted by Tweeter65 on August 29, 2005 at 8:55 AM | link to this | reply

oh, ugh!  So, I take it these apartments are not in the running as Keesh's eventual domain?  Can't wait to hear the rest!

posted by SilverMoon7 on August 29, 2005 at 4:25 AM | link to this | reply

Joe Love, you've kept us waiting too long. Please post

posted by Azur on August 29, 2005 at 12:35 AM | link to this | reply

This post is great.
I can't stop smiling ( which isn't good as the swelling in my cheeks from w teeth removal hasn't quite gone down yet) ha! ha! ha! ouch.

posted by MsVision on August 29, 2005 at 12:19 AM | link to this | reply

Good Build Up

Hey, Joe:

You do have a talent of not just seeing the funny side of a situation, but also of being able to write about it in a way that captures the moment in time for what it is, and by doing so, allows the reader to picture it as you experienced it. Good use of characterization and dialogue, too. You certainly have a few gems that would be worth sending out for publication.

Scot

posted by dog1net on August 28, 2005 at 1:24 PM | link to this | reply

Great writing ...you're quite talented...

Hope you'll seek out some of those e-zines, maybe Country Living. This would make a great regular feature.

Being born and raised in the south means that you're accustomed to being greeted this way. I hope you can get his near-naked image outta your head someday! LOL!!

posted by Passionflower on August 28, 2005 at 6:22 AM | link to this | reply

Joe_Love,

Do you think, he thought that someone had designated that day, as 'Casual Day'?  he-ha-ha

Thanks so much for your visit to so many of my posts.  I enjoy your comments very much.  Hope you are doing well.

  I am peachy as always.  I am glad my workday is over and that I can be back home.  I actually come home sometimes and click my heels together, just like Dorothy, on the Wizard Of Oz. "There is no place like home."                          I click my heals because, it always makes my husband smile! 

Take care and Be Happy.

posted by jacentaOld on August 27, 2005 at 9:53 PM | link to this | reply

Kitty
I just finished writing the follow-up about 2 hours ago. It's one of my funnier things, I think. *grin* I'm glad you enjoyed this entry.

posted by Joe_Love on August 27, 2005 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

That was a surprise ending if I ever heard one!

I hope he put something on before he showed you the apartments.   I think your blog is a great story, and warning to future visitors of Price Place

posted by Flumpystalls3000 on August 27, 2005 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

Joe- My daughter lives in
a seedy suburb of Montreal, and she tells me of the geezers who run to the corner store to buy cigs in their undies. Not a pretty sight.

posted by Cynthia on August 27, 2005 at 12:01 PM | link to this | reply

Joe---
But be thankful for small miracles in the form of tightie whities!! lol.

posted by Julia. on August 27, 2005 at 10:36 AM | link to this | reply

Yowza
That had to be horrifying!!!  Just the mental picture I have in my head of the 80 yr old man is just utterly hysterical.  After all that it sounds like you need my smoothie recipe ;)

posted by RockBitch on August 27, 2005 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Oh, say it ain't so!
Some things, Joe, can never be unseen. And for that, I am deeply sorry for your gain.

posted by UsualSuspect on August 27, 2005 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

Vaklempt

At least his Hanes in the singular was on the lower half, instead of the upper half, as my neighbor likes to appear on his portico.

Cliffhangers come to mind.....

Love ya! Mean it! Hope you win!

posted by KarmaTrain on August 27, 2005 at 5:24 AM | link to this | reply

Well at least theres something to be thankful for...

Thank goodness the screen door was between you....withouth that barrier it would have been even creepier. *SHIVERS*

posted by KODACHROME1970 on August 27, 2005 at 3:57 AM | link to this | reply

OMG! I think I would have fled...

posted by Ca88andra on August 27, 2005 at 12:58 AM | link to this | reply

LOL... well HELLO.... what a greeting. LOL

posted by -blackcat on August 26, 2005 at 8:47 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Lord, Joe!!!
How unsettling! What a weirdo.

posted by SpitFire70 on August 26, 2005 at 6:02 PM | link to this | reply

Joe Love
Mere bloggers don't deserve you.  I hope your writing is appearing elsewhere.   Hemlocker

posted by Hemlocker on August 26, 2005 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

Joe
People are cranky and mean around here, how about writing something?  YOu always make me smile.  Tell us how the Monster manage to take you captive and drag you out to the Acres!

posted by Bel_ on August 26, 2005 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent

Joe, thanks for the props at my blog -- and now that I've seen yours, I'm doubly flattered.  Funny, I tried so hard to get away from that but it still has its grass-stained fascination.

And omg.  Peanut butter pie.  Yes, yessss.

posted by curator on August 26, 2005 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

LOL......great post

posted by _Symphony_ on August 26, 2005 at 9:59 AM | link to this | reply

Thank God for tighty whities, Joe_Love.   If not for them you would have been facing a loosey goosey.

posted by TAPS. on August 26, 2005 at 9:29 AM | link to this | reply

As hilarious as ever JoeLove

posted by Katray2 on August 26, 2005 at 9:19 AM | link to this | reply

ROFLMAO, Joe!
I can just see that.

"You that thar city boy what wanted to look inside h'yar. Well come on in, then." Then a couple of good scratches and a skein of tobacco juice in the corner sums up the visual. I know you didn't write that part, but the movie trailers in the basement gutter theater of my mind conjured that one.

As always, wonderfully descriptive, hilarious, dead-on writing! Can't wait to see what happens next!

posted by strat on August 26, 2005 at 6:08 AM | link to this | reply

How funny! I'm looking forward to the rest! I would love to have seen your
face!

posted by muser on August 25, 2005 at 9:04 PM | link to this | reply

Oh my!
ummmm LOL...maybe he doesn't have an air coditioner...snicker. You have a way of setting a scene that makes it so vivid...too vivid.

posted by Whacky on August 25, 2005 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

joe
lmao........maybe it was his birthday and he was dressing for the occasion?

posted by TIMMYTALES on August 25, 2005 at 8:31 PM | link to this | reply

Joe--I'm really LMAO here. You are so good at capturing scenes. I can
only imagine the look on your face...

posted by Renigade on August 25, 2005 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Joe Love

Thought you might like a Twinkle of your own

posted by mysteria on August 25, 2005 at 7:41 PM | link to this | reply

That must be one of the joys of getting old - just not giving a shit anymore! I wouldn't even answer my door in shorts earlier.

posted by Holy_Grail on August 25, 2005 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Enjoyable post! I think I'd die of shock .

posted by Original_Influence on August 25, 2005 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

'Course, your mouth hanging open
would indicate your shock.   The guy probably figured that at his age, he was entitled to a few eccentricities - including not having to wear clothes on a scorcher of a day like you described.

posted by word.smith on August 25, 2005 at 6:56 PM | link to this | reply

Hi....Great post as always.
Thought you might want to see what's going on in the Road Trip Sagas. Just posted Episode 21.

posted by Passionflower on August 25, 2005 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

haha, Factor!
Come on down here with your camera. Plenty of remote places for you to shoot. lol

posted by Joe_Love on August 25, 2005 at 6:28 PM | link to this | reply

Well, I'd hope the rent was really cheap... <<shudder>>

posted by FactorFiction on August 25, 2005 at 6:25 PM | link to this | reply

another great post

keep up the good work Joe

Tissi Blake

posted by TissiBlake on August 25, 2005 at 6:21 PM | link to this | reply

Joe

Ha!  Great bookends to this story.   First the hilarious description of the arrival of Wilma, then the laid-back lead-up to the shock ending.   Loved it.  Thank God for that screen door, eh?  

posted by Lensman on August 25, 2005 at 5:57 PM | link to this | reply

naked as a jaybird
is one of my favorite all-time sayings.

posted by mikebrown on August 25, 2005 at 3:53 PM | link to this | reply

Joe, I'd say that that was a rock-bottom Price.

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on August 25, 2005 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

Oh LOL!!!
That's a nice shocker in the middle of a day!!

posted by ginnieb on August 25, 2005 at 2:02 PM | link to this | reply

LOLOLOL!!!
Oh honey, you have been traumatized.   Soorry, I'll offer more sympathy as soon as I quit holding my sides and laughing.

posted by Bel_ on August 25, 2005 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

Hi, Joe,
Hank Price sounds like he could be a clone of my dad, who once, several years ago, emerged from his bedroom donned only in his tidy-whities to shake his finger at my then, teenage brother and a group of his friends and tell them to pipe down or he was gona call the law. They all went into shock and had to have years of intense therapy to try and get that image out of their heads. ...........LOVE your stories!!!

posted by Jaxson-Pete on August 25, 2005 at 1:47 PM | link to this | reply

maybe it was laundry day?? :)

now i'm dying to see inside one of those itty bitty apartments...

posted by Dreyma on August 25, 2005 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Joe, who was more scared you or Hank Price? LOL

posted by Ariala on August 25, 2005 at 1:26 PM | link to this | reply

*grin* Medusa
I'm glad it made you laugh. This is the halfway point of this story. I found it was too long to get in one post.

posted by Joe_Love on August 25, 2005 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Sh..t, Joe Love...How can this funny funny stuff be true?!!!!
I can't stop laughing with the old man in his white briefs. You make me laugh on days I'm not laughing. Thanks.

posted by MedusaNextDoor on August 25, 2005 at 1:19 PM | link to this | reply