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What a pretty picture you've painted with word McVision!
I'm catching up! :)
posted by
ginnieb
on October 14, 2005 at 9:17 AM
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What lovely description! I felt like I was there.
posted by
SilverMoon7
on September 1, 2005 at 2:38 PM
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Post 1 of 8 Around the camfire , now with edit changes.
posted by
MsVision
on August 27, 2005 at 7:43 PM
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I agree Jo
and I apprecaite your feedback. I sometimes get a bit caught up in the excitement of the creative flow and don't self edit enough!!! Will fix soon. Thanks!
posted by
MsVision
on August 27, 2005 at 5:24 PM
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MsVision
You described the path and the forest very well. . , however, the dialogue was extremely hard to follow due to the lack of spacing to distinguish who was saying what. I think a simple edit of this piece, inserting line breaks would greatly improve the read.
posted by
Joe_Love
on August 27, 2005 at 11:37 AM
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O the imagry is amazing
I could almost feel the trees and the water.
posted by
Bel_
on August 24, 2005 at 10:39 PM
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MsVision, I like your forest. I would lke to be packing a bag and following a trail there with your characters.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 24, 2005 at 7:32 PM
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Nice!
posted by
Original_Influence
on August 24, 2005 at 7:20 PM
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Your description sounds like something out of a fairy tale.
posted by
word.smith
on August 24, 2005 at 7:17 PM
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Kaitlin is a pretty name
posted by
MsVision
on August 23, 2005 at 2:17 PM
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Thanks Strat!
posted by
MsVision
on August 23, 2005 at 2:10 PM
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Hi,
Just catching up on some of your posts. These are quite good! I'll be back.
posted by
strat
on August 23, 2005 at 8:36 AM
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Only when I tell stories to my daughter. My main goal at the moment is to establish a discipline of writing consistently. I have always loved writing but found it a very lonely process. The great thing about blogging is the interaction. I need writing to be a social process. After I complete about six stories of Miranda Sweet's adventures I am contemplating posting a screen play as I write it.
I would love to make a great feature film one day. One that my daughter would be proud to watch!
Sorry about the formatting I seem to have have lost my ability to have paragraphs and spaces in my writing. have written to Bloggit Help!
posted by
MsVision
on August 22, 2005 at 6:06 PM
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MsVision
This has a nice gentle theme to it. Are you working on children's literature luv? I have a grand-daughter Kaitlin but spelled with the K instead of the C.
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 22, 2005 at 3:01 PM
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