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Krisles
thanks. Yes I do hope to get my  act together and piece my bits and pieces together. Thanks for the encouragement.

posted by robdon67 on August 20, 2005 at 5:32 PM | link to this | reply

cunninglinguist
thanks - these bits and pieces pretty much constitute the beginning of my second draft of the book. I really appreciate the positive feedback. It provides that kick of encouragement that can make a great deal of difference.

posted by robdon67 on August 20, 2005 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

lovelyladymonk
thanks

posted by robdon67 on August 20, 2005 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

mayB

thanks for the comment - glad you enjoyed the post

posted by robdon67 on August 20, 2005 at 5:29 PM | link to this | reply

This is excellent ..very cinemagraphic too

posted by Azur on August 16, 2005 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply

G'day, RobDon...

This is amazing.  I hope you're well today.

posted by lovelyladymonk on August 16, 2005 at 3:24 PM | link to this | reply

Absolutely incredible
This is some amazing writing.  I had the same thoughts that were mentioned in the comment before mine.  This kind of material should go into a great book.  So beautifully written, and you really feel like you're right there.

posted by CunningLinguist on August 15, 2005 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

robdon67..Please tell me you're making a book out of this. I think this is
the most powerful I've read so far of your writing...it's so long, I'm afraid many won't stick with it and they will not have the chance to experience it....and I don't have time to read the one before this...but you sure had me there with you......really, really great.

posted by Krisles on August 14, 2005 at 9:58 PM | link to this | reply