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Hey Lady!!!
Just re-reading some of your stuff..They're very good reads..Thanks for sharing that. How's it going? ..Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 14, 2005 at 12:23 PM
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aaawwww! 
Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 11, 2005 at 5:47 AM
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This poem says so much about our feelings, the way we see or fail to see people. I love its structure and its centredness. Its kind of like a photo with a negative.
posted by
MsVision
on August 19, 2005 at 6:02 AM
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lady of shallott
When you were lying on that table, you might have derived some comfort from your namesake ...
" Out flew the web and floated wide,
the mirror cracked from side to side,
" The curse is come upon me!"
cried the Lady of Shallot.
And you should try looking in the mirror and seeing you father looking back at you!
posted by
ariel70
on August 16, 2005 at 11:29 AM
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Lady
WOW............and just so you know I see all that you don't because I am looking inward..........you can't see the stuff others do cuz that's like trying to see out of the back of your head. You are strong in a beautiful way and I really dig the things you say........what else can I say..............you way cool my Lady.
posted by
ALWAYSALOVER
on August 16, 2005 at 9:50 AM
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Thanks, Cap'n
that means a lot to me.
posted by
ladyofshalott
on August 16, 2005 at 8:04 AM
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lady,
That was excellent--I think some of your best work. It gives an insight of you to anyone reading it, regardless of their level of knowledge of you. It tells about you in a clearly understandable way, yet gives readers no more than they bring... luv it
jj
posted by
Jack_Flash
on August 15, 2005 at 10:46 PM
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Midnight Toker
thank you, that's so sweet of you!
posted by
ladyofshalott
on August 14, 2005 at 7:13 PM
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Great poem !!!!! What a "reflection" on one's self. Very impressive!!!!!
posted by
Jaxson-Pete
on August 14, 2005 at 7:10 PM
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