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that's me all over a giant range of possibilities.
posted by
MsVision
on August 25, 2005 at 6:32 AM
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LOL. I had a little trouble envisioning what overseas meant, considering Australia's locale... It sort of left a gigantic range of possibilities, to my way of thinking!
posted by
SilverMoon7
on August 25, 2005 at 2:46 AM
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Ms Vision
Well done luv, happy you found me so I could find you, now I,ll be waiting for the next installment kiddo
posted by
WileyJohn
on August 19, 2005 at 4:16 PM
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SilverMoon7
pretty much the whole rest of the world. Some close contries are New Zealand, the pacific islands, Paua New Guinea, Singapore and Malaysia. I look forward to reading your new post in the morning. Time for sleep now!
posted by
MsVision
on August 19, 2005 at 6:22 AM
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Where exactly is overseas from Australia? I have to tell you, your writing reminds me of someone I've read before, but I can't think who that author is... anyway, looking forward to the next installment
posted by
SilverMoon7
on August 17, 2005 at 1:32 PM
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MsVision,
very entertaining, the dialogue has a great flow to it....
red
posted by
redlunar
on August 15, 2005 at 11:56 AM
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Not off the rails,
but she is temporarily escaping from her urban terrain and swapping it for something a little rockier. Get out your hiking boots.
posted by
MsVision
on August 15, 2005 at 4:36 AM
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MsVision
So. ., where is Libby Caitlin going??
posted by
Joe_Love
on August 14, 2005 at 5:27 PM
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What's next?
posted by
word.smith
on August 14, 2005 at 1:16 PM
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Cruious chatacters here; a fun read.
posted by
aamie
on August 14, 2005 at 6:03 AM
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At a glance, this looks quite fun. I appreciate too that it's written in a style that I can read speedily.
Perhaps I would try to lose , " replied and begged etc. Let the dialogue express that for itself. Don't overstate it.
But please keep in mind that I don't know anything about fiction.
posted by
Azur
on August 13, 2005 at 10:52 PM
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