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Don't stop writing, your good!
posted by
sarahrg
on September 12, 2005 at 8:31 AM
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Hey there
I am rather intrigued by your writing. You have an unusual and quirky way of storytelling that I like. Please don't get discouraged by the fact that fiction is not the most popular category around blogit!
posted by
FactorFiction
on August 17, 2005 at 6:01 AM
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thanks ThomasFranklin
I really appreciate when people can relate to what I'm writing about.
posted by
MsVision
on August 15, 2005 at 4:40 AM
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Self disipline
is a critical aspect of the writing process.
posted by
MsVision
on August 13, 2005 at 8:06 PM
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You have a fun set of characters to follow in this narrative, with an original setting. A lack of details and verbal direction between dialogue and description makes this a little hard to follow.
It reads as a rough draft thus far and could benefit from a little generous (not TOO generous - don't go Tolkien on us) detail and more emphatic prose.
posted by
CFarmer
on August 13, 2005 at 7:39 PM
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I am stricken...
By the scene you set, the delivery and descriptions, most appealing to the the palate of my imagination.
posted by
food4thought
on August 13, 2005 at 3:47 PM
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butterfly gal flying by
Thanks for stopping by my post and leaving a comment. Your writing is captivating and refreshing. I will be back to read more. I love the dialogue and I will return to read the entire story as I felt drawn in by your characters and a sense of the ancient and esoteric. Simply sublime.
posted by
butterflygal
on August 13, 2005 at 5:18 AM
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Typo- down the road. Jeez.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on August 12, 2005 at 10:50 PM
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I go along with the life style of enjoying life and not working your life away cause thats what they told you to do. I don't need that big house or those taxes. I read the last comment. Fiction isn't the favorite around here. People seem to like opinion and journels. Stories might sell into something bigger done the road.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on August 12, 2005 at 10:49 PM
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Why I write fiction
For me fiction is a concise way of synthezising everything I value and observe about the world around me. I love thinking in pictures and envisage my post before I write it. From a very young age I've loved telling stories. The great thing about Bloggit is there is so much to choose from. I love reading the journals and opinions and all the other categories. so thanks for having a look at my post, even though its outside of what you generally read.
posted by
MsVision
on August 12, 2005 at 8:32 PM
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Ms, I don't usually read fiction
I don't write it either, but comments like the interesting one you made on one of my posts brought me here. I guess I prefer to know about your real life rather than a fictionalized one.
posted by
Cynthia
on August 12, 2005 at 6:48 AM
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Good stuff...keep writing.
posted by
matt2511
on August 11, 2005 at 11:44 PM
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you've a nice writing style, I look forward to hearing more from you.
posted by
Julia.
on August 11, 2005 at 10:21 PM
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I like it!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on August 11, 2005 at 10:16 PM
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Catching up
posted by
Joe_Love
on August 11, 2005 at 9:43 PM
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Yep, that's quite a long break in the tale.
Looking foward to seeing what happens next.
posted by
word.smith
on August 10, 2005 at 1:42 PM
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inspired to write more now
posted by
MsVision
on August 10, 2005 at 8:17 AM
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very entertaining! Am enjoying it, but ten days between was too long!
posted by
SilverMoon7
on August 10, 2005 at 8:03 AM
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