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strat, I'm really glad you got that...
It's the key to happiness I think. Too many men don't figure it out. ;) Too many people really, it's not limited to men. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 17, 2005 at 7:14 AM
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great work
posted by
_Symphony_
on August 16, 2005 at 4:18 AM
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what strat said.
I loved it, thought provoking
posted by
Vanidad
on August 12, 2005 at 9:06 PM
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You know, ten or fifteen years ago,
the following line would have given me a sardonic chuckle:
"words can’t hide
what blatant actions
scream silent
a man’s character
is his destiny"
Now I know that to be a simple, universal, powerful fact.
Very nice work here, Temple!
posted by
strat
on August 9, 2005 at 7:23 PM
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spitfire
It's not negative at all. It's all good, in fact....but that's as much as I'll interpret here. I love you, too. y-o-u ... ;)
posted by
Temple
on August 8, 2005 at 10:50 PM
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smartdog
Well, I'm not sure how you would get fatalistic from this....I don't believe things are set in stone because we have free will and can fuck them up, but I think things happen for a reason. I think we get signals, signs from the universe that guide us to where we want, what we want to be, what we need, what we should be doing, but we don't always listen.
posted by
Temple
on August 8, 2005 at 10:46 PM
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T,
Interesting, no doubt. I hear positive and negative in this one. Hope it's more positive than what I'm getting from it.
Luv ewe!
posted by
SpitFire70
on August 8, 2005 at 10:41 PM
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Temp
I also liked the line from Heraclitus. Nice poem (big surprise ;P).
So... are you a fatalist then?
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on August 8, 2005 at 9:48 PM
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Great stuff, T!
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on August 8, 2005 at 11:53 AM
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oops...Frankenkitty...
Sorry, thank you. I'm glad you liked it. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2005 at 7:06 AM
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Ah, Frankenkitty, if only I could take credit for that line.
It was said by a Greek philosopher, Heraclitus, first. Fun....oh yeah. I better get busy. I forgot. ;)
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2005 at 7:05 AM
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I love that line,
"a man's character is his destiny". Wonderful poem Temple, I love it
Hope you are having fun this weekend.
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on August 7, 2005 at 6:53 AM
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thanks little ms
I always wonder how people "hear" it :)
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2005 at 2:32 AM
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i like the tempo of this poem
posted by
littlemspickles
on August 7, 2005 at 2:27 AM
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Hi Passionflower...
Yeah, I just realized a lot of stuff. I think I'll have a few bad days or moments, but my writing overall is reflecting some things it just took me a while to absorb.
posted by
Temple
on August 7, 2005 at 2:07 AM
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Hey Temple
How's it been going...your poetry is taking on a healthier feel.
posted by
Passionflower
on August 7, 2005 at 1:43 AM
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