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MysticG
Thank you for all the time you spent reading today. I'm glad you like this one, all my poems come from deep places within me.
posted by
Temple
on August 6, 2005 at 6:29 PM
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temple
i think it was quite good, and very heartfelt.
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on August 6, 2005 at 4:49 PM
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redlunar
thank you....I'm glad you liked it, yes, it says long blue bottle there....I never know where that stuff pops into my head. thanks for reading
posted by
Temple
on August 2, 2005 at 10:42 PM
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Frankenkitty
Tormented....perfect word. I'll get through this some how, and it's shown me somethings I need to do for myself as soon as I can get through some immediate crisis stuff that I need to deal with. Things I already knew, but underestimated their importance. I need to build my life here, in San Diego, and stop reaching outside of the city so much. I wish you lived closer, too. That'd be fun. :)
posted by
Temple
on August 2, 2005 at 10:41 PM
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Temple
very powerful poem...I like the image of the pebbles dropping into the blue glass.(bottle ?)
red
posted by
redlunar
on August 2, 2005 at 2:45 PM
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It is so sad. A tormented
heart is an awful thing to have. I hope you are okay, and if not, let someone help you. My mom joined a group, she calls them her "sad friends". A whole group of broken hearted women. My mom thought her story was the worst until she met with her sad friends. They aren't so sad and now the group all go dancing during the week. Sometimes, people care about you and love you, but they don't really understand how you feel. My mom joined this group of strangers and she has 5 sisters and a brother who love her. It's not the same because the family didn't understand. The group of sad friends all had broken hearts, and it bonded them. Just a thought because you don't deserve to remain miserable, although temporary misery is a part of life. Geeesh, I wish I lived closer. Take care and email me if you need me.
posted by
Flumpystalls3000
on July 31, 2005 at 8:40 AM
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smartdog.....wow...
the barrel of a gun....I'm always interested in other peoples interpretations, that's interesting... that's why I never tell what the actual meanings are... thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :)
posted by
Temple
on July 30, 2005 at 6:25 PM
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Temple
I really enjoyed this one. The last line is sharp and cold and honest. So brief: so powerful. It was like looking down the barrel of a gun. Great work.
-smartdog
posted by
smartdog_670
on July 30, 2005 at 5:58 PM
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Offbeat
Thank you....I appreciate that. :) Be safe tomorrow, packing and jumping. Think of me for a second during freefall.
Sweet dreams....
posted by
Temple
on July 30, 2005 at 12:43 AM
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Temple
Beautiful..and no your not alone!
posted by
Offy
on July 30, 2005 at 12:29 AM
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