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The sausages are sounding pretty good right now.
Is Mouse a man or woman?

posted by word.smith on August 5, 2005 at 5:59 AM | link to this | reply

Vision
Your imagery is on point. During reading, it was easy to see the party-filled room. Nice job.

posted by Joe_Love on July 30, 2005 at 4:26 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Ariala
to be a writer alone is unbearable, to have an audience is inspirational. Every comment I read strengthens my resolve to tell stories, and every blogger I get to read teaches me something new about the big, wide world.

posted by MsVision on July 29, 2005 at 11:44 PM | link to this | reply

You have a nice style with good details in your fiction.

posted by Ariala on July 28, 2005 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply